When looking over my poster, and the previous comments I recieved from a year 10 class saying that the 'Devastation Girl' was hard to read, I decided that I needed to change my previous ideas. I went on a website that told me what colours went well over black and white, and after trying a few, I decided that the brown/orange went best with the colour scheme of the poster, and how it matches the colour grading in my music video.
Here is the transformation between the two.
The comments I recieved were:
George Russell : The writing is easier to read, really good!
Alice Clark: Stands out more especially the writing.
George Attwill : I like the warmth of the colour scheme. The colour of the text chosen works with other parts of the image.
Alice Griffin: The orange writing is far better than the white writing, it stands out more and is more pleasing to the eye.
Here is the Final Poster:
I'm really glad I decided to go back and re-evaluate my poster. In doing so I have created a more eye pleasing poster, with better colour schemes, and is easier to read. Overall, it is a success!